My research question for my short analysis is:
What is the purpose of the side comments and beginning/end
comments in the data sets and how does it motivate students to revise their
papers?
Beginning/End Comments
·
positive feedback- makes the students want to
revise
·
complete sentences-makes it more professional
·
references the overall assignment- goal oriented
·
mentions claims in the paper- gives support for
the overall suggestions
Side Comments
·
feedback on specific claims- easier for students
to understand
·
asks questions- makes the writer think and develop
more research
·
fragments rather than complete sentences- laid
back approach
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