Blog 12

I want to analyze Data set 1-4 on the side comments and the beginning end comments.

·         I want to analyze how the teacher’s comments set up students to revise the paper.

·         I want to see if I can identify different languages between the side comments and the beginning/end comments.

·         I want to know how students might interpret the language of the comments based on the order of which the comments come.

·         Do the comments give students options or do they make students feel like they have only one way to explore. (The teachers way)