Data Set 4
What are the connections between the marginal comments and the end-note or overall comments?
Both the
marginal and end comments are giving feedback to improve the essays, however,
the marginal comments give more detail and suggestions, whereas the end
comments give a general overview of comments. The end comments also restate
some of the comments in the margins but not all.
Patterns
In Sample 2, 3, 4 both dive
overall comments on developing stronger introductions and more detail and organization.
Sample 1, and 4 developing
the essay, where 4 needs to condense and pick specifics and then develop on
those specifics.
Codes
Sample 1- Except for the part I
marked above, this overview works well.
Sample 2- Need to go a little further with this (see
criteria=> Reflective discussion on the
on-going evolution of your process, Conclusion
that sets up a plan for your future writing process
Sample 3 - Work on your
introduction. This is too general.
Sample 4- This feels like it’s
starting in the middle. My gut says
there needs to be some introductory material before it, setting up the context
before you complicate the term.
These for codes are all make suggestions concerning the introduction.
They all suggest that the introduction needs to be developed in some way.
Categories
Organizing- Organizing the essay that
will make sense to the reader
Developing- conduct more research or add
more arguments to make the essay stronger
Detail-
picking a statement and asking the who’s, what’s, how’s etc…
Generally agreeing with a statement or
paragraph,
Disagreeing or bringing up an argument
for a statement or paragraph
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